do you want me to lie about it?
i hate you tell you mate...but that really needs some improvement. there are some good parts, such as the...uh...well...and there are some other parts that you should really fix up..for example you need to add detail! like put things into the background. don't just make the wraiths two sticks and a body.. give it some detail and the blood staings were all the same... take your time and really do a good job. Also! BIG THING! the sound was pretty bad! don't repeat the same things over and over and over again. really annoying! anyway...keep trying.